The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pictorial diagrams give information about the multitude of changes
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in the unknown
island
for visitors in an unspecified period.
Overall
,
it is clear that
after constructing the
island
was witnessed several structures, including a pier, housing
accomodations
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accommodation
and a restaurant. Before erecting, there were a lot of trees in the eastern and western parts of the first map. The beach was situated
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top westernmost side
in
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the
island
which stood the sea.
Additionally
, the
island
length was only 100 metres. Remarkably, the pier has been created in the southern part of the map in order to
visiting
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and leaving of tourists.
Furthermore
, there are two ships.
Moreover
,
the
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vehicle track has been created to go to the reception that accepts
new comers
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and a restaurant
that
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where
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visiters
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can eat some snacks,
while
the footpath has been built to go 15 housing
accomodations
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accommodations
and the beach where people will able to swim.
However
, the trees have
been
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remained unchanged.
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