The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pictorial diagrams give information about the multitude of changes
of
in the unknown Change preposition
apply
island
for visitors in an unspecified period. Overall
, it is clear that
after constructing the island
was witnessed several structures, including a pier, housing accomodations
and a restaurant.
Before erecting, there were a lot of trees in the eastern and western parts of the first map. The beach was situated Correct your spelling
accommodation
the
top westernmost side Change preposition
on the
in
the Change preposition
of
island
which stood the sea. Additionally
, the island
length was only 100 metres.
Remarkably, the pier has been created in the southern part of the map in order to visiting
and leaving of tourists. Change the verb
visit
Furthermore
, there are two ships. Moreover
, the
vehicle track has been created to go to the reception that accepts Correct article usage
a
new comers
and a restaurant Correct your spelling
newcomers
that
Correct word choice
where
visiters
can eat some snacks, Correct your spelling
visitors
while
the footpath has been built to go 15 housing accomodations
and the beach where people will able to swim. Correct your spelling
accommodations
However
, the trees have been
remained unchanged.Unnecessary verb
apply
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