Instead of asking the government to bear the cost of higher education, students should pay their own tuition fees themselves. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, every
student
want
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to pursue
a
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higher
study
for
a
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better
oppurtunities
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opportunities
of
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life.
Although
, their still many
of
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students who need the
government
to cover
a
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cost
for
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major
education
needed like in middle school and high school. I totally agree regarding
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student
students
have
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having
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to pay
themselves
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a tuition fees
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a tuition fee
tuition fees
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on
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for
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higher
education
and I will elaborate on my point of view below.
To begin
with, if the
government
have to pay tuition fees
of
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for
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higher
education
for every
student
this
will
putting
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put
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too much
reponsibilities
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responsibilities
on the
government
.
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reason is that the
government
have a limited
budget
to spend on every part of
country
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so if the
government
have to
tak
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take
this
responsibility, it will cut off
alot
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a lot
of chance for
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another part
other parts
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of
country
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that
also
need a
budget
to spend on it.
For instance
,
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a student
the student
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student
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students
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who need to
study
a
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apply
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higher
education
need to have
thier
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their
own
budget
because it
not
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is not
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a basic need
education
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for education
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already.
Furthermore
,
government
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only have to cover a basic needed
education
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that is
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is
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apply
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enough. In
term
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of the
government
have
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having
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a job to cover all basic
need
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needs
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education
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of education
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for every
student
in a
country
in order to make a
country
move forward but not a higher
education
need for every
student
.
For example
, various of students have their
disired
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desired
desire
to
study
a
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an
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upper
education
to make themselves better on
carrer
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career
or
workiong
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working
walking
path.
However
, the most
importantly
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important
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is that
their
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still
a
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milons
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millions
million
of
student
in a
country
that need a fundamental
education
or a core basic
education
that
every one
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everyone
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should have a chance to
study
it and the
gornment
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government
need to cover
for
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apply
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the
cost
that
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apply
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first before giving a
cost
to students who need to
study
a
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higher
education
. In conclusion, everyone who is a
student
have
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has
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a purpose to
study
a
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for a
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greater
education
on
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in
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their life but it
also
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is also
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not a job or
responsibilty
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responsibility
for the
gorvernment
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government
to cover that
cost
because
in
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apply
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a
country
still have various part to spend a
budget
on. So
that
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I have to
agreee
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agree
with the statement and
i
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already told
my
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you
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all of the reasons above.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bear the cost
  • tuition fees
  • financial management
  • taxpayer burden
  • public finances
  • allocate resources
  • social inequality
  • socio-economic disparities
  • access to higher education
  • long-term economic benefits
  • educated workforce
  • earning potentials
  • investment vs expense
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