The map shows what an area looked like in 1986 and in the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map shows what an area looked like in 1986 and in the present.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given map depicts the changes that occurred in a particular space in1986 than what it looks like nowadays.
Overall
, it can be seen that,
initially
, the field was more rural and less modernized. We can
also
see that nowadays there are several buildings constructed on it, presenting an urban landscape. At the beginning of the period, there was farmland located in the northeast part of the map which was replaced by residences.
Additionally
, the large house in the centre space was expanded and transformed into a retirement home,
furthermore
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the shops in the north-west, between the River Stroke and the primary school were demolished and new homes were developed in
this
place.
Moreover
, the primary school in the centre region of the range was extended with two new classrooms added to it.
Finally
, the farmland located
in
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southwest
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, below the post office was removed to take place for the new condominium complex. In summary, it is possible to confirm that in the past, there was more green field and
this
place was less residential than it is now. Today it is more modernized.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban development
  • residential buildings
  • commercial buildings
  • infrastructure
  • recreational facilities
  • population growth
  • living standards
  • green spaces
  • environmental concerns
  • transportation networks
  • connectivity
  • accessibility
  • economic development
  • land use
  • agricultural
  • vacant lots
  • developed properties
  • functionality
  • economic landscape
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