The map shows what an area looked like in 1986 and in the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map shows what an area looked like in 1986 and in the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given map depicts the changes that occurred in a particular space in1986 than what it looks like nowadays.

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, it can be seen that,

initially

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, the field was more rural and less modernized. We can

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see that nowadays there are several buildings constructed on it, presenting an urban landscape. At the beginning of the period, there was farmland located in the northeast part of the map which was replaced by residences.

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, the large house in the centre space was expanded and transformed into a retirement home,

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furthermore

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the shops in the north-west, between the River Stroke and the primary school were demolished and new homes were developed in

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place.

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, the primary school in the centre region of the range was extended with two new classrooms added to it.

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, the farmland located

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southwest

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the southwest

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, below the post office was removed to take place for the new condominium complex. In summary, it is possible to confirm that in the past, there was more green field and

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place was less residential than it is now. Today it is more modernized.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

184 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

urban development
residential buildings
commercial buildings
infrastructure
recreational facilities
population growth
living standards
green spaces
environmental concerns
transportation networks
connectivity
accessibility
economic development
land use
agricultural
vacant lots
developed properties
functionality
economic landscape

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The map shows what an area looked like in 1986 and in the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

in some cities, people are choosing cars instead of bicycles, while in other cities riding bikes is which development do you think is better?replacing cars. why is this the case?

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