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You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain: • Why you cannot pay the rent • When you will pay the rent. • How you will ensure you can pay your rent in the future

#landlord #rent #future
Dear Ram, I am a good tenant for
last
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 four years. Each and every
month
 I
had
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paid my rent on the exact date
as
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you mentioned. But now I am currently unemployed
due to
 lay off in my office. So, I am experiencing
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financial problem. So, I cannot pay the rent from the next
month
. Now I seeking help from my friend to
lent
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some
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me some
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 money and
also
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the
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personal loan to solve my
financially
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 problems once I get
any
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this
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 money I will pay the rent without no more delay. Now I
currently
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 hired
from
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new
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 company they asked me to join from next
month
. So, its won’t be any delay
for
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 the rental from the next
month
. I would save some money to
fulfill
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 my financial requirement. I hope you would understand my current situation and help me
on
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this
 thank you. Yours Faithfully Sundar
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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