An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

#friend #holiday #region #information #advice #offer #clothes

Dear Malini Dhanav, I hope

this

letter finds you in good health.

Last

week I received your letter and I am happy that you are coming to my country.Here I will share my opinion it will help to plan your visit in advance. My area has a lot of star hotels available and their prices are

also

very cheap per night.But I was not allowed to stay there. If you don't mind you can stay at my house. I will arrange a huge room for you with an attached bathroom.

Moreover

, Near my area a lot of tourist places are available.Tajmahal is just 10 km from my house. Another place is a theme park which foreigners mostly visit places.All the facilities you can get in a short travel distance .

finally

This

season is summer in my area so try to bring normal cotton T- shits and a summer cap. Do not worry if you do not have cotton ones, I will share my T-shirts.I hope that my information is very useful to you. If anything you want to know more do not hesitate to me . Best warms, selva

Submitted by selvaselvi06 on Wed Mar 29 2023

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

189 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

The Closing

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