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The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

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It is true that we live in a world where information is shared through the
internet
, and some believe that
this
 can create several
issues
,
this
 essay will discuss some of these problems and put forward several solutions to tackle them. Copyright problems are one of the main
issues
 that we face today, basically, anyone with a phone or a computer can surf the
internet
 and through
that
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 he has the access to various websites and he can simply copy the article that he has found and claim it to himself and
as a result
, the real creator can never be found.
Moreover
, there is another problem which is the ignorance of the true source of the information;
therefore
, not knowing whether
this
 piece of news is reliable or not and
this
 can have severe consequences
such
 as the spread of misleading news on a wide basis. Governments throughout the world must take action together to minimize the effect of these
issues
 as they are indeed global, first of all, governments should find a way to prevent
internet
 surfers from stealing information online, and one way to do it is by forcing them to mention the real writer in case they had to copy the article.
Secondly
, they should make an intervention regarding the sources that journalists use on a daily basis,
for instance
, by putting special stamps on reliable sources so that reporters can be sure of their reliability.
To conclude
,
it is clear that
 there are various troubles caused by the
internet
 and steps need to be taken to tackle these
issues
.
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