Some feel that movies and tv shows are a good way to study history despite their lack of historical accuracy at times. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the modern era, certain people agree with the view that telecasted

television

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shows and movies are

good

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a good

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to get knowledge regarding

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historical event despite the fact that they are not completely accurate.

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the remaining contradict the statement.

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my viewpoint, the second statement seems to be more rational.

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, I will explain both views

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my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs and

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will lead to a logical conclusion as well.

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with, there

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myriad

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reasons in support

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opinion but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that generally, it gets easier to learn about the past from the audio and visual facts. As people can learn easily through these because

the

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way

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these are presented in front of the individuals, people feel can feel that

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actual

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way

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and

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, they leave an effect on their mind and do not feel that history is boring.

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, if

person

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a person

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starts learning ancient

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from books it gets quite boring for them. Moving

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towards the next point, as convey of

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history through

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and radio is more reliable as humans can learn

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past

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by sitting in their homes. They can save the cost of travel and they can save the money

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entry to the museums.

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, it could be said that

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is cost-effective as well. On the flip side, the information conveyed through these sources

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not always reliable.There are some

events

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or facts that are modified and

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telecasted to

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society.

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is detrimental

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society.

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, the story of Maharaja Ranjit Singh a Sikh Warrior that I watch on

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and read in books as well

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was quite changed by the show casters

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from reality

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, when historical places are used for the shoot of past

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, at

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point in many cases the ancient tools or accessories get damaged.

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too harmful to

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society's culture. the reason behind

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is these ancient items need the proper care so that, they could be preserved for the mere future generation as well.

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, in my view and the reasons aforementioned above, learning through

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and movie is the quite better option. Though,

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drawbacks cannot be ignored.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Some feel that movies and tv shows are a good way to study history despite their lack of historical accuracy at times. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

More and more people are using mobile phones and the internet to communicate. Therefore, people are losing their ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that a crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person's nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some university students work in companies for a short period of time during their years of studies. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages in this experience?