Some feel that movies and tv shows are a good way to study history despite their lack of historical accuracy at times. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the modern era, certain people agree with the view that telecasted

television

shows and movies are

good

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way

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to get knowledge regarding

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historical event despite the fact that they are not completely accurate.

While

the remaining contradict the statement.

According to

my viewpoint, the second statement seems to be more rational.

Further

, I will explain both views

along with

my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs and

thus

will lead to a logical conclusion as well.

To begin

with, there

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myriad

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reasons in support

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opinion but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that generally, it gets easier to learn about the past from the audio and visual facts. As people can learn easily through these because

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way

these are presented in front of the individuals, people feel can feel that

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actual

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and

hence

, they leave an effect on their mind and do not feel that history is boring.

Whereas

, if

person

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a person

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starts learning ancient

events

from books it gets quite boring for them. Moving

further

towards the next point, as convey of

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history through

television

and radio is more reliable as humans can learn

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past

events

by sitting in their homes. They can save the cost of travel and they can save the money

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entry to the museums.

Hence

, it could be said that

this

is cost-effective as well. On the flip side, the information conveyed through these sources

are

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not always reliable.There are some

events

or facts that are modified and

then

telecasted to

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society.

Therefore

this

is detrimental

for

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society.

For Instance

, the story of Maharaja Ranjit Singh a Sikh Warrior that I watch on

Television

and read in books as well

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was quite changed by the show casters

fromreality

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from reality

Furthermore

, when historical places are used for the shoot of past

events

, at

this

point in many cases the ancient tools or accessories get damaged.

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way

too harmful to

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society's culture. the reason behind

this

is these ancient items need the proper care so that, they could be preserved for the mere future generation as well.

To conclude

, in my view and the reasons aforementioned above, learning through

television

and movie is the quite better option. Though,

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drawbacks cannot be ignored.

Wed Mar 29 2023

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Some feel that movies and tv shows are a good way to study history despite their lack of historical accuracy at times. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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