The chart below shows the employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.
The bar graph compares the
rate
of employment
in 6 different countries between male
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males
female
for the years 1995 and 2005. Fix the agreement mistake
females
Overall
, the employment
rate
was higher than females
in all the countries in 1995, Change preposition
for females
whereas
in 2005, the employment
percentage varied according to
the country.
There was a significant increase in the
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employment
conditions in 2005 compared to 1995. Both the employment
rates
of women
and men
increased in all the countries. The men
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men's
employment
rates
in Switzerland and Iceland were over 65% in 1995 while
there were only 55% employment
rates
for men
in the UK. In 1995, New Zealand and the USA had approximately 60% of male employment
rates
rate
. On the contrary
, the women
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women's
employment
percentage in 1995 was lower in Australia and New Zealand. The employment
rate
was at its peak for women
in Switzerland.
In 2005, the employment
rate
rose for both women
and men
. The highest employment
rate
for women
was in Switzerland for
68% and the lowest was I. Australia for 38%. Though the percentage was higher likened to 1995, Change preposition
at
men
were still leading the employment
sectors.Submitted by omondavlat91 on
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