Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many today believe that social

media

has an

overall

negative impact on both average people and society more generally.

This

essay completely agrees with

this

viewpoint because these social

media

sites not only make individuals addicted but

also

create a cyberbullying culture in

the

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online society.

To begin

with, social

media

may affect

on

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the mental health of individual users. Most people spend an excessive amount of time looking at these websites, and

this

habit distracts us from concentrating on our daily

task

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.

For example

, many of us spend half of our day chatting with people on Messengers, watching short Tik Tok videos for entertainment, or scrolling

all

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the photos on Instagram. At

first,

these interesting contents and videos make us feel relaxed and happy;

however

, if we build up

this

habit, we will slowly feel depressed because we are gradually ourselves from

the

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real-world interactions and replacing them with virtual platforms.

Additionally

, the drawbacks of social

media

are able to create a cyberbullying culture. Since the accounts on most

of

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the

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online platforms like Facebook, can be registered without their true identities, the bullies can easily create fake accounts to send

an unpleasant emails

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an unpleasant email

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, private messages and public comments toward others.

As a result

, the victims experience extreme stress because the evil actions harm their reputation and upset their mental. In conclusion, social

media

is an overwhelming negative for both normal citizens and the entirety of society by isolating individuals from real life and allowing the bad to bully others mentally online.