Advertising has become an unavoidable part of everyone's life. Some people say that advertising is a postive part of lives while others say it is a negative one. Discuss both views and include your own opinion.

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One of the social concerns today relates to advertising.

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it is widely believed that advertising

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many benefits to human life, others believe

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will have

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a negative

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effect

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advertising. In my opinion,

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an individual

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individual

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can face a

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difficulties

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when using advertising. On the one hand, it is argued

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that

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can know about new

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released. The main reason is that advertising is a method that

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the image of items to many

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. It is

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possible to say that newly launched products will be able to reach many

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through various types of advertising

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as on TV,

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internet. One good illustration of

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is Oppo has just launched a new folding phone line on March 28, 2023. Before officially launching that phone, Oppo has done many advertising campaigns about

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phone on many different platforms. Another reason is advertising help

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make a clear comparison between two products.

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, individuals can compare the two features of Oppo and Samsung folding phones through the advertisements of these brands.

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, it is strongly believed by others that information on

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advertising

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is wrong.

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often have

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opinion because

advertiser

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advertisers

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always

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information to attract

ads

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viewers. A second point is that

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will pay more to buy a product

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advertising. A particularly good example here is Apple users had to spend twice as much to buy

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iPhone

X because the advertising money

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company spent was too big in 2019. In conclusion, advertising not only bring many positive effect but

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negative aspects. Personally, I tend to believe that advertisers should reduce the cost of advertising and

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the information on the

advertisments

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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296 words

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Advertising has become an unavoidable part of everyone's life. Some people say that advertising is a postive part of lives while others say it is a negative one. Discuss both views and include your own opinion.

Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Many manfactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which casues many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?