Mrs Barrett an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter -suggest how you could help her in her home -say why you would like to do this work -explain when you will and will not be available

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Dear Mrs Barrett, I am writing

this

Linking Words

letter to present myself for the candidature of house-keeping and home care work as advertised In 'The Daily Mail' Newspaper by you. To start with, cooking and Nanny care tasks are of my daily routine as I have to manage household chores

along with

Linking Words

my part-time job in the Information Technology sector and as an international college student. I urgently require work

due to

Linking Words

the recession effect in my primary job as they deduct more money from my salary and secure my tuition-paying capacity for the institution.

Moreover

Linking Words

, summer vacations are on the verge and I will be free for one month from my college and can attribute free time for cooking and cleaning work in

your

Correct pronoun usage

show examples

home;

Although

Linking Words

, every Sunday remains reserved for my family reunion and computer tuition that are currently being taken by me to enhance the probability of my promotion in the current job. I hope you will consider my application and reply as early as possible. Hoping for

positive

Add an article

the positive

show examples

feedback. Yours Sincerely Jaspreet Singh

jassisingh320Thu Mar 30 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

176 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7
band
In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
For the past few years, more individuals prefer reading from e-books than from paper books. From my perspective, reading books on an electronic device is more advantageous than on a printed one since it is more convenient.
7
band
In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.
In this day and age, several parents and students choose to study abroad or attend university in another city but some people choose to stay in their home country. It is worth considering about percentage of parents who want to send their child to live far from them; in fact, values are the main factors in the decision as well and in Thailand that have a popular mindset about studying abroad will benefit their children more than studying in the home nation. I strongly agree with this statement.
7
band
A Australian friend recently sent you a present by post. You want to thank him/her. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter -say how you felt when you received the present -describe what you like about it -explain how you will use the present
How are you? I hope you doing well! It has been a long time since we met.I miss you so much. I hope to see you again in November. Moreover, thank you so much for your lovely birthday present.I am so glad you still remember my birthday.I just opened the box.Then, I saw lipstick and the package was so cute. Anyway, my sister said that too.
6
band
Children find it difficult to focus during school hours. Discuss the main reasons and a solution
Many children argue that it is hard to focus in class. There are diverse reasons why kids and teenagers may experience this difficulty at school. Some of the most significant ones include neurodiverse conditions and an old-fashioned educational system. A good outcome includes the review of education methods applied by schools, providing an inclusive learning environment.
7
band
Some people believe that the government should spend more money putting in more works of art like paintings and statues in cities to make them better places to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary urban landscapes, street art has emerged as a ubiquitous form of expression, enriching cities with its creative vitality. Advocates argue that governments should allocate funds to support artists, enhancing the cultural fabric of urban spaces. This essay concurs with this perspective, asserting that investing in public art projects is essential for fostering cultural vibrancy and economic growth.

In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

A Australian friend recently sent you a present by post. You want to thank him/her. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter -say how you felt when you received the present -describe what you like about it -explain how you will use the present

Children find it difficult to focus during school hours. Discuss the main reasons and a solution

Some people believe that the government should spend more money putting in more works of art like paintings and statues in cities to make them better places to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?