Mrs Barrett an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter -suggest how you could help her in her home -say why you would like to do this work -explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, I am writing

this

letter to present myself for the candidature of house-keeping and home care work as advertised In 'The Daily Mail' Newspaper by you. To start with, cooking and Nanny care tasks are of my daily routine as I have to manage household chores

along with

my part-time job in the Information Technology sector and as an international college student. I urgently require work

due to

the recession effect in my primary job as they deduct more money from my salary and secure my tuition-paying capacity for the institution.

Moreover

, summer vacations are on the verge and I will be free for one month from my college and can attribute free time for cooking and cleaning work in

your

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home;

Although

, every Sunday remains reserved for my family reunion and computer tuition that are currently being taken by me to enhance the probability of my promotion in the current job. I hope you will consider my application and reply as early as possible. Hoping for

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feedback. Yours Sincerely Jaspreet Singh

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

176 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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