You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have received a letter from your landlord, Mr Matthews, asking you to renew your contract and pay more rent. You are happy in the property but the landlord has not been maintaining it well. Write a reply to Mr Matthews. In your letter: • indicate your intention to stay • give information about the maintenance issues • explain what you would like the landlord to do now. Write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr Matthews,
I am writing
this
email to let you know that I received your letter about the new contract and rent details a day ago.
Firstly
, I just want to let you know that I am really happy with the location and size of the house
. As my work location is not much far from the house
, it would be a great option for me to commute, moreover
, my housemates are also
working professionals, they always maintain the house
calm and clean. Therefore
, I intend to stay in your house
for a long term; possibly, for more than a year.
However
, I like the place over time, there are some maintenance issues which must be fixed such
as one light in my room is broken and water leakage in the washroom which flows through the common area. Therefore
, it causes a big problem whenever I have to do work at night on the laptop.
I would like to request you that please fix the above-maintained things so that i
can live here for Change the capitalization
I
a
long term. Correct article usage
the
Moreover
, please order a new induction for the house
as the old one does not work properly.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Regards,
AnkitSubmitted by ankitkaushik4657 on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each idea is developed in its own paragraph for clarity and readability.
task achievement
Provide a little more detail on what specific action you want from the landlord regarding maintenance.
task achievement
The letter maintains a respectful and polite tone, which is suitable for the situation.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are clear and appropriate, enhancing the letter's formality.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite