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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The Pie chart illustrates information about the percentages of methods used to get rid of dangerous waste items in the United Kingdom,
Sweden
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 and the Republic of
Korea
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, it can be seen that in the United Kingdom, 82% of the trash is dealt with by dumping it underground.
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 in
Sweden
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this
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 method's proportion is a little above half and in
Korea
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, only 22% of garbage is dug underground.
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 It is obvious that there is no recycling system in the UK,
Korea
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's most used solution for
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 problem is recycling.
Sweden
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 recycles a quarter of its toxic litter.
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, all three countries use the burning method as a solution.
Korea
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 destroys 9% of garbage by using flame and the UK burns only 2% of its toxic material
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 a big 1/5 proportion of dangerous trash is burnt in
Sweden
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. Surprisingly, Chemical Treatment and dumping poisonous waste into the sea are the solutions only used by the United Kingdom and only 8% of unsafe stuff is demolished using these methods

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sweden, korea with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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