The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
The line graph illustrates how many tourists made
inquiries
in the Tourist Information Office in a specific city from January to June 2011. Use synonyms
Overall
, there are three methods visitors can use to make queries, either in person, by letter/ email, or by telephone. Linking Words
However
, these channels are uncommon in the first month, showing fewer figures. Albeit, there is a dramatic change in the pattern as the in-person and by telephone grow significantly throughout the month, Linking Words
while
by letter/email shows the opposite.
In January, more than 800 people made their Linking Words
inquiries
by telephone which is the highest in that month and fluctuated for several months until April. Use synonyms
Then
, it slowly went upwards, ending with 1600 Linking Words
inquiries
. Followed closely by writing a letter or thru email at under 800. The figure remained for the next two months, Use synonyms
then
dropped to the lowest point in May and June at under 400 Linking Words
inquiries
.
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On the other hand
, the personal approach at the beginning was the lowest number at above 400 Linking Words
inquiries
. But the number of tourist queries increased fifth folds, reaching the peak in June, and ended with less than 2000 Use synonyms
inquiries
.Use synonyms
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