You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: - Explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery - Explain the importance of this delivery - Ask for a replacement item to be sent

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to raise a concern regarding an incomplete shipment

recieved

Correct your spelling

received

on September 9, 2025, and the order number is 201901971UOC. I have ordered some clothes, tote bags, and

accessrioes

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accessories

from your website. Unfortunately, one black tote

bag

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was missing in

this

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package. I carefully checked the delivery box

as well as

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the invoice, but the

bag

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was not included.

This

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delivery is particularly important to me

Punctuation problem

. I

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made

this

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purchase for my coming international trip. Without the

bag

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, I am unable to make

this

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trip. I kindly request you to arrange for the missing travel

bag

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to be sent to me at

the

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your

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earliest convenience. If necessary, I am happy to provide photographs of the received items or any

further

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details you may require to resolve

this

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matter quickly. I look forward to your prompt response and hope the missing item will be delivered soon. Yours faithfully, xxx

ravleenkaur804btl

Sep 10, 2025

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task response

Task response: The letter says you want a replacement and gives order details, but it could spell the missing item clearly and say how you want the item sent. Add these facts and keep a calm tone.

coherence cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Put each idea in a new paragraph. Use simple linking words like 'also', 'but', 'therefore' and use full stops to end ideas.

coherence cohesion

Logical structure: Start with your aim, then give key facts, then make your request, and finish with a polite closing.

coherence cohesion

Greeting and closing: Use a standard opening and closing. 'Dear Sir or Madam' and 'Yours faithfully' work well here.

coherence cohesion

Single idea per paragraph: Keep one idea in each paragraph. Do not put many ideas in one paragraph.

coherence cohesion

Order number and date are given, which helps the company check the loss.

task achievement

The tone is polite and formal.

task achievement

There is a clear request for a replacement item.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

156 words

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