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Nowadays many people choose to be self employed , rather than to work for a company or organisation Why might this be the case? . What could be the disadvantages of being self employed?

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In the modern world, it has become a common scenario that most
individuals
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 are choosing to become
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self-employed rather than working under a
company
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.
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 provides some drawbacks of being self-employed. There are many reasons why most
people
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 are establishing their own businesses nowadays.
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, income can be a major element for most
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. It is obvious that today, the salary which is given to freshers by companies is comparatively lower than their boss , even if they work twice as their employer .
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, the working environment in a
company
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 is very stressful for most employees because of annoying
people
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 and over workload. It can see that in
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workplaces
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workplace
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individuals
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 are comforting massive pressure from their
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managers
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 because of the deadline they have to meet in their jobs in
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period
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 of time.
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, self-employed can assist a person to relieve from these circumstances because they can work from their comfort zone.
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 , there are some drawbacks
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 development. First of all, the risk element in
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 most
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people
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 start a business using loans or with other assistance so that they can develop.
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,
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 certain times
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 face dramatic loss as a starter but it can really ruin a person's career.
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, during the pandemic , most self-employed
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 confronted a significant drop in their businesses because of the imbalance in the economy ,and as a ,result some ended up
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bankrupt and closing their own professions.
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, being self-employed come
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 a lot of obligations . As a manager
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company
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 individual will be in charge of every unit like finance or Marketing .
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, the person needs to focus on all those sectors to develop a
company
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 and as a ,result some
people
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 become mentally depressed or anxious about certain things in their job , thereby causing some health problems in their life.
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, self-employment is a better option for most employees because it is profitable and
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stress
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, it
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 has so many drawbacks like mental issues and
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 elements.
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