Some people say that youngster should take part time job while study in university. Do you agree or disagree.

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It's often stated that youngsters should take a part-time job during
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. Considering that I am a student,
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essay is written by a person who is directly touched by the topic. First of all, tuition fees can be expensive, so, it may be helpful to have a job during
university
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years, especially, for students that have to leave their family house in order to get their degree.
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, working could be the only way to pay for their education.
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,
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of the lack of practical experience, many graduates are not prepared for the labour market.
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, an occupation could help to shape them for the future.
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, a high level of education requires a huge amount of study.
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means that it is not is to do both work and studying at the same time. In my opinion, the
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can be already too stressful and a job could only aggravate the situation. Despite what I've just stated, it is possible to obtain a degree
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working. I,
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, used to work 8 hours shifts
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completing my BAC.
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, working can be an important formative activity and if it is possible to do it
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attending
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lessons it should be done. even if I agree with the benefit of a part-time occupation, I disagree with the pressure they often put on us. Everyone is in charge of deciding to organise their own lives as they wish and none should judge our decision.
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