The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The line charts provide information about how the change in electrical devices in entrepreneurship and how much time people tidy their areas in a particular country from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, it is clear that
the proportion of households with electronic devices had significant upward trends, while
the amount of time doing housework per household experienced a downward trend.
In terms of using electrical devices, In 1920, washing machines had the highest rate
at 40 %, followed by refrigerators and vacuum cleaners which were 30% and around 0.2%. Meanwhile, from 1940 to 2019, the number of washing machines gradually fluctuated, it was at around 75% and had a
smallest Change the article
the
rate
in 2019, while
the rate
of refrigerators and vacuum cleaners were dramatical
increase, they had the same Add an article
a dramatical
rate
at about 100 % by the end of the period.
Turning to the number of houseworks
, in 1920, stood at around 50%. There had a substantial decline until the year 1960 which is around 20 %. After that, it Correct your spelling
housework
decrease
marginally until 2019. In comparison, Change the verb form
decreases
although
the number of electrical appliances was increase
, it had a Wrong verb form
increased
decrease
trend in the Change the verb form
decreasing
amount
of hours of housework per week and per person.Change the quantifier
number
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