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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a childs development while others think it is important to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your opinion

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 of the social concerns today relates to
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that teaching
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children
 at home is best for a
childs
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 development
while
 others think it is important to go to
school
 .
While
 it is widely believed that teaching at home is best for
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a childs
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childs
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 development, others believe teaching
children
 at
school
 is very important. In my opinion,
reasons
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have the following advantages and disadvantages. On the
one
 hand, it is argued
by
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some that
children
is
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best
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development
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 when they are educated
in
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home
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.
Firstly
 homeschooling helps parents and
children
 understand each other better about each other’s personalities and
throughts
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thoughts
,
however
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 students often feel lonely.
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 parents choose what their
children
 learn.
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, parents can teach their
children
one
 on
one
,
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they
 often understand the curriculum better and more quickly, too.
On the other hand
, it is strongly believed by others that spending
children
to
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school
 is the best. People often have
this
 opinion because students sometimes can play
school
 sports or participate in other activities and programs available to people in a
school
. In conclusion, homeschooling or
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school
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are all educational methods. Personally, I tend to believe that depending on the position of each family and the wishes of the child, we will choose the most appropriate educational method.
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