The diagram below shows process for recycling platic bottles

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The diagram illustrates how

plastic

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bottles

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are

being

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recycled.

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, there are a total of 9 steps within

this

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process, with 3 managed by humans and 3 managed by

mechines

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machines

. People throw their collected

bottles

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into a specific recycle bin,

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the truck will come and collect those

bottles

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. Because there are many types of

plastic

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bottles

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, workers will have to sort and

seperate

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separate

each

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bottles

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bottle

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by hand at the recycling centre.

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The next

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step is to compress the

bottles

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into blocks and sent them to the next crushing

mechine

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machine

. In the fifth step, the recycle centre will use a

mechine

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machine

to crush the bottle blocks into tiny

piceces

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pieces

called washing.

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those tiny washing will be transformed into

plastic

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pellets in the sixth process. Before the

plastic

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pellets be transformed into raw

meterials

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materials

, they need to be heated up first. Those raw

meterials

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materials

will be

stock

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together, waiting to be turned into products in the

last

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process called producing end products. After the consumer

finished

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finishes

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using the products, all

recycle

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recycling

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processes will begin again.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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4
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

174 words

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The diagram below shows process for recycling platic bottles

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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