The diagram below shows process for recycling platic bottles

The diagram below shows process for recycling platic bottles
The diagram illustrates how
plastic
bottles
are
being
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recycled.
Overall
, there are a total of 9 steps within
this
process, with 3 managed by humans and 3 managed by
mechines
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machines
. People throw their collected
bottles
into a specific recycle bin,
then
the truck will come and collect those
bottles
. Because there are many types of
plastic
bottles
, workers will have to sort and
seperate
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separate
each
bottles
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by hand at the recycling centre.
Next
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step is to compress the
bottles
into blocks and sent them to the next crushing
mechine
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machine
. In the fifth step, the recycle centre will use a
mechine
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machine
to crush the bottle blocks into tiny
piceces
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pieces
called washing.
Then
those tiny washing will be transformed into
plastic
pellets in the sixth process. Before the
plastic
pellets be transformed into raw
meterials
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materials
, they need to be heated up first. Those raw
meterials
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materials
will be
stock
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together, waiting to be turned into products in the
last
process called producing end products. After the consumer
finished
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using the products, all
recycle
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processes will begin again.
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