The diagram below shows process for recycling platic bottles
The diagram illustrates how
plastic
bottles
are being
recycled.
Unnecessary verb
apply
Overall
, there are a total of 9 steps within this
process, with 3 managed by humans and 3 managed by mechines
.
People throw their collected Correct your spelling
machines
bottles
into a specific recycle bin, then
the truck will come and collect those bottles
. Because there are many types of plastic
bottles
, workers will have to sort and seperate
each Correct your spelling
separate
bottles
by hand at the recycling centre. Change to a singular noun
bottle
Next
step is to compress the Correct article usage
The next
bottles
into blocks and sent them to the next crushing mechine
. In the fifth step, the recycle centre will use a Correct your spelling
machine
mechine
to crush the bottle blocks into tiny Correct your spelling
machine
piceces
called washing. Correct your spelling
pieces
Then
those tiny washing will be transformed into plastic
pellets in the sixth process. Before the plastic
pellets be transformed into raw meterials
, they need to be heated up first. Those raw Correct your spelling
materials
meterials
will be Correct your spelling
materials
stock
together, waiting to be turned into products in the Wrong verb form
stocked
last
process called producing end products. After the consumer finished
using the products, all Wrong verb form
finishes
recycle
processes will begin again.Replace the word
recycling
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