Some people think that countryside life is healthier while others believe that city is better in order to have a healthy lifestyle. Discuss both views with your own perception.

While

it is widely believed that

countryside

life

is healthier, others believe that the

city

is better in order to have a healthy lifestyle. In my opinion, we must

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protect our bodies. On the one hand, it is argued by some that

countryside

life

is healthier than the

city

.

Firstly

countryside

life

is quiet not noisy and chaotic because when

people

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live in

a place quietly, they feel the

body

is relaxed,

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doesn’t think much.

For

example

, my mother likes to live in the

countryside

because in the

city

she thinks about work very much.

Secondly

, the

air

is good and little smoke from vehicle help

people

have

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strong health.

For

example

, the

air

city

is very polluted if

people

inhale, their

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will have very sick. The

air

countryside

isn’t more polluted than the

air

city

so

people

will have little sick.

On the other hand

, it is strongly believed by others that facility is modern, very place entertainment, hospital, gym,… so

countryside

life

isn’t healthier than in the

city

.

People

often have

this

opinion because

people

who have strong health

then

must have the full facilities from medical to service.

For

example

, when

people

have sick

then

they will bring to a hospital near fastly. A second point is that

this

has very healthy food and drink for the

body

of

people

.

For

example

, food and drink have nutrients that will help the

body

of

people

to be very strong, and limit very sick. In conclusion,

countryside

life

is healthier

while

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, the

city

is better in order to have a healthy lifestyle. Personally, I tend to believe that which

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protect our bodies.