Some children nowadays take sports seriously while others play sport in their free time. Is this a positive or negative development?

These days,

sports

are taken seriously by some

children

whereby others play these activities in their leisure time. I believe

this

case

is

negative

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development because

children

who locate

sports

to

significant

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point

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in their lives usually experience frustration and they do not

their

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studies well. The first disadvantage of

this

case

is

high

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likelihood of

children

’s devastation in the end. Most of them devote their time to

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an athlete in the future.

However

, statistics show that only three per cent can realize their goals

due to

some causes. To illustrate that, a significant portion of

children

are not selected

to

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professional teams because of their inadequate skills and despite their talents, some of them suffer from injuries

in

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their

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young age.

Although

their journey was bright in their childhood,

as a result

, they may become frustrated.

Thus

,

this

situation is often harmful

for

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children

. The second detrimental aspect of

this

case

is presumable

education

issues.

Children

who take

sports

seriously often do not pay attention to their studies sufficiently.

Instead

of attending

education

activities, they opt to spend their time on

sports

and

this

situation leads to

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in their exams. Most sportsmen’s low grades and

education

skills can be counted as an example to explain

this

case

.

In addition

, unfortunately, some

children

may show aggressive behaviour

due to

their competing addiction and

this

case

may cause

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discrimination among others. In conclusion, causes and examples can be multiplied in

this

situation.

Although

this

case

is beneficial for

children

’s physical development and discharging their energies, for me, its negative impacts overweigh

positive

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ones

due to

their probable depressive health and

education

drawbacks. 46 dk.