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Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries why this is the case? is it positive development?

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Now, several developing
countries
 are focusing mainly on developing their
tourism
industry
. There can be several reasons that can explain why
this
 is the case and I think that
this
 is disadvantageous regardless of some benefits, which arise from
this
 situation. There are various causes why developing
countries
paying
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 more attention to their
tourist
 industries. For one, l think after seeing
financial
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 benefits of
tourism
 in
touristic
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countries
, other developing
countries
 automatically try to improve
this
 field.
This
 is mainly because these
countries
 can not get the same level of profit from other areas as they can gain from
tourism
, as most developing
countries
 can not afford to develop their manufacturing
industry
 and produce invaluable goods for the world.
Thus
, these
countries
 might use buildings or monuments that they already have to make a fortune. Another aspect of it is that some developing
countries
 tend to apply
tourism
 to become more popular.
As a result
 of an advanced
tourist
industry
, they can attract more and more people
as well as
 some investors. In
this
 way,
countries
 can develop themselves considerably with the money investors spend in
this
 country, seeing as investors unconsciously can solve a lot of problems in
the
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society like increasing unemployment rates. Admittedly,
this
 situation can bring about some benefits.
For
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 by developing
tourist
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the tourist
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industry
, the government can meet the needs of local residents with a help of money
comes
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that comes
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 from
tourism
, yet it does not mean it is totally advantageous. As everyone accepted, good touristic sites
attracts
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 millions of people, which means
high
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 level of noise pollution and
lack
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 of space. In
this
 way,
local
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 population suffer
most
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 by losing
quiet
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 atmosphere of their country and their chance to move freely in the streets.
Last
 but not least, as the number of people grows, it is inevitable to have more trash and waste, leading to disastrous effects on the country’s environment. After all, not only local residents, but ecology as well tend to
being
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 afflicted by the expansion of the developing country’s
tourist
industry
. In conclusion, these days,
the
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one of the main priorities of
the
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developing
countries
 is improving their
tourist
industry
 as much as possible for a variety of reasons,
while
 I believe that it can be counterproductive in some respects.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
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