You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir, I am writing
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letter in relation to an article that was published by your 'Daily Mail' newspaper. I am Jaspreet, a loyal follower and appreciator of
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newspaper.
From
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last
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week,I was eagerly
waiting
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for
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Sunday's Edition of the newspaper as it was already conveyed
last
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week that all towns of Punjab will be covered;
consequently
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waiting for my town's inclusion in the list.Unexpectedly,
instead
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of the third
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this
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article was published on the front page and it increased delights inside me.To start with, I feel thankful that my town is included and all monuments and religious buildings are covered.
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, in the
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paragraph, the similarity between all towns was mentioned which is not the case as all buildings are painted in pink to distinguish my city and
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and there is no garbage in the area as written in the article.It's my humble request to kindly pay a visit to my home so that we can have lunch together and
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can visit important sites in town which may help to enhance your knowledge about the city. Looking for positive feedback from your side. Yours sincerely Jaspreet
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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