You recently bought a product, but you are not satisfied with it. Write a letter to the company that made the product. In your letter: •Describe the product you bought •Explain why you are not satisfied with it •Suggest what the company should do to fix the problem

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my disappointment with the product I purchased from your store . I bought a microwave oven of brand XX from your store on 16 March and I got delivery next day morning.

While

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I am unpacking the product, I noticed that the glass door of the oven was damaged. I called your customer care and registered a complaint. I was informed that the technician will come and solve the issue within 24 hours, but until today my complaint is not resolved. I would appreciate it if you could send a technician to my home as soon as possible. If the damage cannot be repaired, please replace the item or refund the full bill amount. Yours faithfully. Jennifer Ramos.

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Mar 31, 2023

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

127 words

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