Some people think that private schools have many advantages while others think there have many drawbacks for the community. Discuss both sides and give an opinion
Are Private schools good for students?
Trying to answer the question can be very tricky because it's difficult to balance the advantages and the downsides of a private school system.
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, not all types of non-public institutes are the same. In fact, some private schools are made just for the purpose of buying a degree. Linking Words
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, I won't consider that kind of school in my essay.
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type of school is freer in the organization of the programs. Linking Words
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, they can offer a better-structured program, focusing on specific skills. Linking Words
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, they tend to develop direct contacts with many firms and businesses that operate in the same area. In other terms, they offer a significantly higher possibility to find a good occupation after graduation. A second argument that could be made about private institutes is that are not under the strict control of authorities. Linking Words
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, their professors should not be conditioned by a dominant politic thought. Linking Words
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the smaller pressure of a sort of censorship.
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In contrast
, the main downside is the cost of education. In fact, the high tuition fees couldn't be afforded by many students. Linking Words
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reason, wealthier people could get a better education and Linking Words
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could result in social inequalities. In a dystopian society where all schools are private, poor citizens wouldn't have any opportunity to reach social gratification.
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way everyone has the same possibility to succeed at an academic level. In conclusion, the Government should give everyone the opportunity of studying.Linking Words
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