The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
The chart illustrates the money spent on consumer goods in
France
and the UK
in the year 2010, consumer goods named cars, computers, books, perfume and cameras.
As transparent from the statistics, cars were the item of all others where the highest amount of money had been spent. Also
noteworthy is that the British spent the most wealth on consumer goods than France
in the period given.
In terms of cars, the UK
spent more expenditure on this
category, about $450,000, on this
as opposed to the French at merely $400,000. Likewise
, British expenditure was higher on books than the French (roughly $400,000 and exactly $300,000 correspondingly). In the UK
, the camera buyers shot a peak at approximately $350,000 and were [over half of = over double that of] the French ($150,000).
On the other hand
, the remaining part of the money was spent on France
. Above $380,000 was spent by the French on computers, whilst spending on this
category by the British ranked in descending order, approximately $350,000. Expenditure on perfumes in France
was marginally higher = witnessed a marginal rise than that of the UK
, around $200,000 and $150,000 respectively.Submitted by hihihahahoho on
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