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The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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 Table shows the intensity of
rainfall
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 on average between the city of Woofsville and
Blacks
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boro
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 every month. The results varied among those two cities. Raining in Woodsville was increasing as it approached the end of the year. Starting point was 5
inches
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 of
rainfall
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 in January.
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 it dropped considerably for the next six
months
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 -until July with only 0.75
inches
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. It was followed by a small increased rain average for August and September. It rose again at twice the rate in October and November, but there was a slight decrease in
December
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, as much as 0.5
inches
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, making it account for only 5.5
inches
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 raining
at the end
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 of the year. Unlike Woofsville, in
blacks
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boro
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, there was a steady drop of average rain as they changed
months
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 towards
December
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. From January to February, there was a little growth of an average of as many as 1
points
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point
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.
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, until September,
Blacks
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boro
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 got less rain. The Fall kept moving from a value of 2.5 to just 0.25. The data shows more frequent
rainfall
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 in the
last
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 three
months
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, with the final average in
December
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 at 2.5. Despite changes, average
rainfall
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 between Woodville and
Blacks
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born
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was born
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 in twelve
months
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. They have an exact opposite trend. The rainstorm frequency from January to
December
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 only grows in Woodsville,
whereas
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 it was depleting in
Blacks
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boro
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rainfall, blacks, boro, inches, months, december with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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