The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
Table shows the intensity of
rainfall
on average between the city of Woofsville and
Blacks
boro
every month. The results varied among those two cities. Raining in Woodsville was increasing as it approached the end of the year. Starting point was 5
inches
of
rainfall
in January.
Then
it dropped considerably for the next six
months
-until July with only 0.75
inches
. It was followed by a small increased rain average for August and September. It rose again at twice the rate in October and November, but there was a slight decrease in
December
, as much as 0.5
inches
, making it account for only 5.5
inches
raining
at the end
of the year. Unlike Woofsville, in
blacks
boro
, there was a steady drop of average rain as they changed
months
towards
December
. From January to February, there was a little growth of an average of as many as 1
points
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.
However
, until September,
Blacks
boro
got less rain. The Fall kept moving from a value of 2.5 to just 0.25. The data shows more frequent
rainfall
in the
last
three
months
, with the final average in
December
at 2.5. Despite changes, average
rainfall
between Woodville and
Blacks
born
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in twelve
months
. They have an exact opposite trend. The rainstorm frequency from January to
December
only grows in Woodsville,
whereas
it was depleting in
Blacks
boro
.
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