The diagram illustrates how the sugar made from the sugar cane plant.
The diagram illustrates the operation of
sugar
production from the sugar
cane plant.
In general . the visual shows that the process involves several steps starting from cane planting to the final product.
To start with , the first step is
the canes planting and growing to be mature after 12-18 months from planting. After that, the harvesting season starts when the canes are harvested manually or by a specific machine , and then
the harvested sugar
canes are sent to the crushing step to produce the sugar
juice . In the next stage , the sugar
juice is purified by a limestone filter and then
with heat, the juice is concentrated by evaporation to become a syrup. After that, the prepared syrup is sent to the centrifuging stage , where the sugar
crystals are separated from the syrup by utilizing a high-speed rotating machine. Finally
, the separated crystals are sent to the drying and cooling stage , only then
the final product is ready to be used for different purposes.Submitted by vet.lezan on
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