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some people think that a law should exist so that young people under eighteen cannot be out after the midnight. Others think it should not be. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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some people that it should be obligatory for
teenagers
 to come back
home
 before
midnight
.
While
 some others believe that it is not a good idea to deter the young from being at
home
 at special hours. It would be discussed in
this
 essay both sides of
this
 issue, and I would mention that I believe students under 18 should be at
home
 before 12. On one hand, a group of the public say that it is dangerous for the young to be out after
midnight
. In
this
 contemporary era, safety has been strongly decreasing. There are lots of threats for pupils in the streets,
while
 they are out after
midnight
.
For example
, thieves and criminals people usually are in the city after 12 and they may make a menace to
teenagers
,
Although
 youngsters have abilities in order to defend themselves.
Therefore
, it is better that they be inside.
On the other hand
, some people argued that limiting
teenagers
 is not a logical way to student treatment. they say that they must be free to give their own decision about what they want to do. as a case in point they should do every hobby at every time, go to travel alone or with their friend, experience new experiments etc. It is a good idea to leave them free for choosing their lifestyle and treat them independently, But, in my
opinion
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 we are responsible for their health and safety, so I think they must be at
home
 before
midnight
. In conclusion, in
this
 essay, it is investigated two views about the time that
teenagers
 ought to be
home
 and I would argue that I believe that pupils should be at
home
 before 12.
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