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The maps below show the future plan about the Biology School in particular university

The maps below show the future plan about the Biology School in particular university
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The given map illustrates how the biology school at a certain university is planned to change in the future.
Overall
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, the road, indoor sports hall, and central library remain unchanged,
while
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 some new construction will be added to the south of the central library. It can be easily seen that the majority of trees between the road and the indoor sports hall will be removed and replaced by a new lab and office. On the south side of the road, there is a plan to log all the trees and build a car park for staff
instead
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. Next to the central library, the drama centre will become the music centre. In the future, the area for the IT centre will be expanded
according to
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 the plan. The café remains in the same position between the teaching building and the lecture room. The buildings share the same pattern as well;
however
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, they are going to be doubled in number.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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