The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given pie charts compare the ages of
inhabitants
of two countries in 2000 and give predictions for the future.
Correct article usage
the inhabitants
Overall
, it's clearly seen from the chart that the number of Linking Words
people
within 15-59 Use synonyms
years
in Use synonyms
Yemen
will grow in 2050 Use synonyms
while
the number of Linking Words
people
of the same age group in Italy's Use synonyms
population
declines.
In 2000 Use synonyms
Yemen
's Use synonyms
population
was made up of a significant number of young Use synonyms
people
. Individuals between the ages of 0-14 Use synonyms
years
were the majority with a figure slightly higher than 50%. , Use synonyms
However
in ,Linking Words
Italy
Add a comma
,Italy
people
of 0-14 Use synonyms
years
numbers were three lower than their counterparts in Use synonyms
Yemen
. By 2050 young of 0-14 Use synonyms
years
numbers will decline in Use synonyms
Yemen
and Italy to 37.0% and 3% respectively. Use synonyms
People
between the ages of 15-58 Use synonyms
years
percentage were almost half of the entire Use synonyms
population
, Use synonyms
Linking Words
however
there will grow in 2050 to 57.3%.
In ,Italy Add a comma
,however
people
of 15-59 Use synonyms
years
were the majority of their Use synonyms
population
at 61.6%, but Use synonyms
this
rate will drop by 2050 to 46.2%. Old Linking Words
people
of 60 and above were underpopulated in Use synonyms
Yemen
in 2000 but their rate in Italy was quite higher. By 2050 old Use synonyms
Use synonyms
people's
Change noun form
people
population
in Use synonyms
Yemen
will grow just slightly Use synonyms
while
their Linking Words
population
increase significantly in Italy.Use synonyms
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