The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given pie charts compare the ages of
inhabitants
of two countries in 2000 and give predictions for the future.
Correct article usage
the inhabitants
Overall
, it's clearly seen from the chart that the number of people
within 15-59 years
in Yemen
will grow in 2050 while
the number of people
of the same age group in Italy's population
declines.
In 2000 Yemen
's population
was made up of a significant number of young people
. Individuals between the ages of 0-14 years
were the majority with a figure slightly higher than 50%. , However
in ,Italy
Add a comma
,Italy
people
of 0-14 years
numbers were three lower than their counterparts in Yemen
. By 2050 young of 0-14 years
numbers will decline in Yemen
and Italy to 37.0% and 3% respectively. People
between the ages of 15-58 years
percentage were almost half of the entire population
, however
there will grow in 2050 to 57.3%.
In ,Italy Add a comma
,however
people
of 15-59 years
were the majority of their population
at 61.6%, but this
rate will drop by 2050 to 46.2%. Old people
of 60 and above were underpopulated in Yemen
in 2000 but their rate in Italy was quite higher. By 2050 old people's
Change noun form
people
population
in Yemen
will grow just slightly while
their population
increase significantly in Italy.Submitted by yeboahsamuellaabban on
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