Few artists ever manage to achieve fame, let alone a liveable wage. Often artists struggle to make meet for most of their lives. For this reason, some people believe that it is irresponsible for a parent to encourage their child to persue an artistic career. To what extent do you agree with this view?

In today's world, some parents are more likely to not support and encourage their offspring to pursue an artistic career because of the lack of livelihood and wage through

art

.

While

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some categories believe

that is

suitable to encourage their child in

this

.I totally disagree with

this

statement.

To begin

with, some humans have the competencies and abilities to create marvels in

this

sector at an early age

such

as painting or sculpting .

Moreover

, some innate skills can be discovered in childhood which is an undeniable fact that can help children lately to achieve fame and salary mostly in adult age.

Additionally

,

art

can be considered

as

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a means of communication to illustrate the culture of a nation towards

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its history .

For instance

, some paintings can illustrate the lifestyles of people in

this

decade .

Also

, the development of academics of painting and sculpting

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all across the world can be a positive effect on the importance of

art

nowadays .

On the other hand

, some citizens argue that

art

is not crucial and an artistic career cannot lead a generation to a

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avenir.

Furthermore

, they believe that all the money and financial aid provided by the government should be spent more and more on health, employment and even agriculture

instead

of

art

and culture.

For example

, they think that

art

cannot feed families actually and the people who have succeeded in

this

area are just rare cases. In conclusion, in my opinion , I strongly agree that authorities and institutions can make the necessary effort to enhance the artistic areas and provide the artists with the equipment and funding that they need to continue properly their

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