The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
the line graph illustrates the average
temperature
per month, whereas
the table shows the figures for annual hours
of shining in 3 cities, namely London
, new york
and Sydney
.
overall
, in terms of monthly temperatures, London
and new york
witness the same trajectory, while
the figure for Sydney
records the opposite pattern. in addition
, the number of hours
shining in new york
and Sydney
is roughly similar.
looking at detail, in January, the temperature
in new york
and London
account for approximately 5 and 10, respectively. at the end
of the year, the aforementioned cities reach the same pattern as in January. in July, while
new york
's temperature
hits its peak of 30, this
category only fluctuates around 25 in London
. in contrast
, at the beginning of the year, the temperature
in Sydney
is over 25 but drops by roughly 10 to 15 until July. afterwards, this
records an upward trend, accounting for 25 in December.
regarding the shining hours
, new york
follows the highest pattern ( 2,535), whilst Sydney
's shining hours
make up 2.473, which is approximately double the figure in London
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