You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 254 words.

It is believed that the high
sales
of trending
goods
among buyers are a result of powerful advertisements which is not the authentic
demand
of the market and society. I absolutely agree with
this
point of view and I think that the majority of advertisements make
people
purchase unnecessary items.
However
, some advertising gives
people
information about know-how products. First of all production of a new product doesn’t mean that there exists real
demand
for the product. Artificial
demand
is created by the Marketing team of any manufacturing company to sell their products.
For example
. the promotion of the new iPhone 11 shows how many cameras it has a high-quality
picture
Fix the agreement mistake
pictures
show examples
.
However
, it is not so different from the previous edition of the same iPhone.
As a result
of
this
,advertisement millions of
people
bought new iPhones in order to alter iPhone 10
although
it was not required so far.
Secondly
,
people
overconsumption of
goods
because of unreliable advertisements and psychological affect. There are some examples of increasing
sales
by ‘right’ marketing strategy to change the psychology of humans.
For instance
sales
of Orbit gums doubled after an advertisement on TV where the actor used two gums
instead
of one. Another example is the usage of toothpaste where the actor used three or even five times more toothpaste than was required. All these examples proved that humans used
goods
improperly and
sales
of these
goods
would fall down in the case of learning.
To conclude
huge manufacturing companies make humans buy consumer
goods
which is not necessary to psychological influence and artificial
demand
.
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