Some people believe that social media sites, asch as Facebook or Twitter, have negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way.

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general

opinion

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there is a huge discussion about the relationship between social media and the ability of young people to form personal relationships. Someone believes influences in a negative way, others

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. A lot of people had some social problems linked to the overuse of

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social network like Facebook, Instagram or Twitter, and especially the

last

one has created a specific social phenomenon called echo chamber.

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the enforcement of a wrong belief

due to

the constant expositions to it, is a phenomenon which is polluting our public discussion paving the way to

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increasing

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misinformation and social conflicts.

On the other hand

, a lot of people

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the social network and

internet

are improving their capability in public speech and their culture increasing their possibility to have a good conversation. Another increasing phenomenon is the

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,

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when the aim of your days is escaping from your

life

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imprisoned in your own room. Especially in Japan,

this

is a big trouble

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the Country and for the government of Tokyo, that

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the duty to get better

this

drastic situation. In conclusion, the issue is only about the way using

internet

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and social networks: you have to moderate your use of the new technology, it’s a duty

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real

life

and

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internet

life

. No one could live in a dystopian scenario where social

life

is only on

internet

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, we must live our reality,

nonetheless

if it is empty.