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goverments should spend money on railways rather than roads to what extend do you agree or disagree with this statment?

#goverments #money #railways #roads #statment
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The amount of
money
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 ,which should be spent on railways, has been raising a lot of debate ,lately.Some might believe it is more important to use the country’s
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 on developing the
railway
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as well as
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 its station.
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 others suppose that it will be more beneficial to specialize some
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 in reconstructing the roads and infrastructure.
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 with,spending
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 on improving trains and train stations has become essential mattel , in the contemporary epoch,as it became the most used way of transportation among adolescents
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.
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 spending more
money
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 on its development has become a common request.
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 how much finances needed to improve one
railway
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 is enormous .
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 , almost all
railway
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 stations in the world are reconstructed to be eco-friendly,regarding the amount of fossil fuel required to operate.
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, the majority of people ,who benefit from
this
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 system, suggest that it should be improved.
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, others see that it is more vital to pay more attention
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-wise to public streets ,
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 their infrastructure.As not only no matter how modern the
railway
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 has become, there will be always locations ,where trains can not access ,
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 as the suburbs and rural areas.But
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, the number of accidents , caused by poor-quality roads has been raising daily.
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, in my opinion, the government’s
money
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 should not be spent only on one project ,but I believe that improving roads is crucial ,as it saves lives .
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 why it should be a priority.
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