Some people think importing foreign movies and TV programs is good for a country's culture. Others believe it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Worldwide, all kinds of virtual entertainment

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searching for mental refreshment and knowing about

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different cultures. some of the time we are involved with foreign shows which are not much more standard and acceptable for all. Some other concerns believe that need to develop our

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program which is familiar to all. In

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I will discuss both parts and I want to try to give my best point of view. On the one hand saying that, we can get a lot of new memoranda from other countries, it is happening through the media of TV shows and moving pictures. They have developed

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sector through new skills, knowledge and talent of artists. As they are solely interested in viewing their own nation's story motion picture shows.

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, one popular program is X-FACTOR which I have seen regularly and

people

are affected by these different types of suspension.

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has pretty interested to watch.

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they like to watch only their state film themselves.

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, they have much more interest in provincial cinemas as they can understand

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won culture and they are getting more enjoyment from

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comedy shows. They believe that some creators are producing excellent story scripts shown in a magnificent manner.

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, my uncle lives in India and he

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to show Indian movies quite often. And he

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a week in other foreign dramas. In conclusion, I would like to say that everyone has their own perspectives but my view is that I prefer to see the homey shows

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reason of it is more familiar to us and more understandable in

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language.

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so we should respect each other.

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