The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.

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The illustrated map depicts the transformation of Ryemouth Village between the period 1995 and the present. In general, there are some significant developments regarding the building and facilities,

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some particular facilities remain the same. In 1995, forest parks and farmland were located in the eastern part of the main road. There were

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a shop and fish market in the southern part of the residential area.

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, the fishing port was located in the middle of the sea. Now, the farmland is transformed into a golf yard

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the forest park which is changed into a tennis court.

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, shops are replaced by

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restaurant

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restaurants

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the fish market turns into an apartment. There are some additional houses in the residential area. A carpark is added as one of the hotel's facilities located in the eastern part of the hotel.

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but not least, a fishing port is no longer attached to the sea.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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4 paragraphs

156 words

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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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