The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.

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The illustrated map depicts the transformation of Ryemouth Village between the period 1995 and the present. In general, there are some significant developments regarding the building and facilities,

although

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some particular facilities remain the same. In 1995, forest parks and farmland were located in the eastern part of the main road. There were

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a shop and fish market in the southern part of the residential area.

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, the fishing port was located in the middle of the sea. Now, the farmland is transformed into a golf yard

along with

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the forest park which is changed into a tennis court.

Then

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, shops are replaced by

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restaurant

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restaurants

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while

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the fish market turns into an apartment. There are some additional houses in the residential area. A carpark is added as one of the hotel's facilities located in the eastern part of the hotel.

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but not least, a fishing port is no longer attached to the sea.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

156 words

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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.

Some people think the main purpose of school is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather than to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Countries around the world require more and more energy every year for domestic and industrial use. What are the causes of this excessive energy consumption, and how does it affect the environment?

Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.