The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.

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The illustrated map depicts the transformation of Ryemouth Village between the period 1995 and the present. In general, there are some significant developments regarding the building and facilities,

although

some particular facilities remain the same. In 1995, forest parks and farmland were located in the eastern part of the main road. There were

also

a shop and fish market in the southern part of the residential area.

In addition

, the fishing port was located in the middle of the sea. Now, the farmland is transformed into a golf yard

along with

the forest park which is changed into a tennis court.

Then

, shops are replaced by

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restaurant

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restaurants

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while

the fish market turns into an apartment. There are some additional houses in the residential area. A carpark is added as one of the hotel's facilities located in the eastern part of the hotel.

Last

but not least, a fishing port is no longer attached to the sea.

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4 paragraphs

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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.

Task 2: In many part of the world, people do research on their family history. Some people believe that finding our about previous generations is a usefull thing to do However, others believe that it is better to focus on present and future generation. Discuss both view and give your opinion?

Some students tend to play computer games rather than do sports. Why is this? What can be done to tackle the problem?

Young people prefer listening to music rather than listening to the news on the radio. Is this a positive or a negative trend? Provide reasons and examples for your opinion.

In most of the societies, the role of mother and father differs what are the courses of this difference ? What will be the parental roles in future?

In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?