The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.
The illustrated map depicts the transformation of Ryemouth Village between the period 1995 and the present. In general, there are some significant developments regarding the building and facilities,
although
some particular facilities remain the same. In 1995, forest parks and farmland were located in the eastern part of the main road. There were
also
a shop and fish market in the southern part of the residential area.
In addition
, the fishing port was located in the middle of the sea. Now, the farmland is transformed into a golf yard
along with
the forest park which is changed into a tennis court.
Then
, shops are replaced by
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restaurant
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while
the fish market turns into an apartment. There are some additional houses in the residential area. A carpark is added as one of the hotel's facilities located in the eastern part of the hotel.
Last
but not least, a fishing port is no longer attached to the sea.
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