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You have not seen a close friend for a very long time. You also still have a few of your friend's belongings that were left at your house the last time she visited In your letter include Why you are writing What you've been doing since you last spoke together Apoligize for still having the items and ask how you can return them

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Dear Sam, It's been
such
 a long
time
 since we have spoken or seen each other. I hope
this
 letter finds you well and that life has been treating you kindly. I am writing
this
 letter because I have been thinking about you and realized that it's been almost so many months since we talked to each other. So, I hope that you are doing well. I missed our conversations and the
time
 we spent together. we should definitely hang out soon and should spend a good
time
 together. Since we spoke
last
time
, there are many changes happened in my life. I moved to a new job and am
also
 working on some of my personal projects as well. You know I was very lazy to do the exercises but I am going to the gym regularly these days and almost reduced
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 kilos of my weight. I am very happy about that because I feel healthier and more confident. On the other note, I want to apologize for still having a few belongings of yours at my home. I would like to know how I can get them back to your place so that I can return the items as early as possible and I'll make sure to reach your things safely to your place. Hope to see you soon Thank you, Sunil Edupuganti
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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