You have not seen a close friend for a very long time. You also still have a few of your friend's belongings that were left at your house the last time she visited In your letter include Why you are writing What you've been doing since you last spoke together Apoligize for still having the items and ask how you can return them

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Dear Sam, It's been

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a long

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since we have spoken or seen each other. I hope

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letter finds you well and that life has been treating you kindly. I am writing

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letter because I have been thinking about you and realized that it's been almost so many months since we talked to each other. So, I hope that you are doing well. I missed our conversations and the

time

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we spent together. we should definitely hang out soon and should spend a good

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together. Since we spoke

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time

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, there are many changes happened in my life. I moved to a new job and am

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working on some of my personal projects as well. You know I was very lazy to do the exercises but I am going to the gym regularly these days and almost reduced

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kilos of my weight. I am very happy about that because I feel healthier and more confident. On the other note, I want to apologize for still having a few belongings of yours at my home. I would like to know how I can get them back to your place so that I can return the items as early as possible and I'll make sure to reach your things safely to your place. Hope to see you soon Thank you, Sunil Edupuganti

Submitted by sunil.edupuganti29 on Mon Apr 03 2023

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

226 words

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