You have not seen a close friend for a very long time. You also still have a few of your friend's belongings that were left at your house the last time she visited In your letter include Why you are writing What you've been doing since you last spoke together Apoligize for still having the items and ask how you can return them

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Dear Sam, It's been

such

a long

time

since we have spoken or seen each other. I hope

this

letter finds you well and that life has been treating you kindly. I am writing

this

letter because I have been thinking about you and realized that it's been almost so many months since we talked to each other. So, I hope that you are doing well. I missed our conversations and the

time

we spent together. we should definitely hang out soon and should spend a good

time

together. Since we spoke

last

time

, there are many changes happened in my life. I moved to a new job and am

also

working on some of my personal projects as well. You know I was very lazy to do the exercises but I am going to the gym regularly these days and almost reduced

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by 15

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kilos of my weight. I am very happy about that because I feel healthier and more confident. On the other note, I want to apologize for still having a few belongings of yours at my home. I would like to know how I can get them back to your place so that I can return the items as early as possible and I'll make sure to reach your things safely to your place. Hope to see you soon Thank you, Sunil Edupuganti

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

226 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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