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Experts believe that, over the next decade, robots will be doing many of the jobs currently done by humans. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

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In our modern world
robots
 became more useful and sometimes they started to change
people
 in some parts of work. Are there more benefits or drawbacks? In my personal opinion,
this
 process is
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an inevitability
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inevitability
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 in our life.
However
, it could provide a
lot
 of problems for our society. In
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 I would like to discuss both points of view and give my own. On
bright
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 side,
robots
 help us to make our life easier and better. Nowadays , they can change humans in a majority
kind
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kinds
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 of dangerous
job
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,
such
 as in
army
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the army
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,
police
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.
Furthermore
,
people
 started to use
robots
 in fire accidents .
Consequently
, save a
lot
 of lives and decries expenses for fire
workers
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equipment’s
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equipments
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.
In addition
, robot
devises
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 are saving a
lot
 of lives in healthcare , because they can do
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the job
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job
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jobs
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 of doctors better and more accurately.
On the other hand
, new technology could be
reasons
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of
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 problems for
people
. Especially, artificial intelligence has a
lot
 of data about our world and it became smarter
then
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people
. Of course, programmers
are
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control it, but we can not predict the future.
In
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 the same time,
robots
 and modern technology
in general
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 are not extremely safe, and we have to check and repair that sometimes. As a
resalt
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result
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, we have to produce a
lot
 of parts for
this
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robots
, and it could be terrible for us.
To conclude
, I would like to wish our world increasing and glorious.
However
, we need to keep in mind, that only humans can save our planet against disasters.
While
people
alive
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,
robots
 can live, but without
people
, they are not needed.
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