Popular events like the Football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension and safely releasing patriotic emotions.

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People debate if international
sports
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competitions could have a positive or negative impact on the tension between
two
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countries and their inhabitants. I strongly disagree with the statement that
sports
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events
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represent a good way to manage international tensions and release extreme patriotic feelings. I feel
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way for
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main reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
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, during international
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events
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such
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as the world cups or Olympics the rivalry between
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states or groups of people can scale to a major proportion. Indeed, depending on the political situation, a simple match may lead to a "war" within a
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scenario.
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, the football match between Argentina and England during the World Cup of Mexico 1986 is a good example. A few years before the game, Argentina and England were at a war context for the territory of Maldives islands, during that period thousand of Argentinians died
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of the war.
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this
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reason, among Argentinian players and fans, revenge was a common feeling in the Azteca Stadium.
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example demonstrates how the political issues between
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states can be exhibited in a
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competition.
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, international tensions can affect not only the competitions but
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the possibility of athletics participating in sportive
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, enhancing the social issues among people from different countries. Despite the sport should be beyond international relationships, sometimes the tension between the
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nations does not possible that athletes from some countries can to compete.
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, the attacks of Russia on Ukraine have restricted the participation of Russians in several disciplines.
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, if they are able to compete, they can not use the colours of their country. In summary,
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international
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events
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can be seen as
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parties, I totally believe that these competitions could increase the rivalry between nations
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enhance extreme nationalist emotions.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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