In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
Our world is developing day by day and in the
future
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transports
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transport
such
as cars
, buses, trucks
will be without drivers. Correct word choice
and trucks
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transports
have a passageres
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passages
passengers
people
who are traveling
inside. I personally believe that it would be more helpful for Change the spelling
travelling
people
and improve infrastructure in the city and world. This
essay will discuss advantages
and disadvantages of driverless driving with some examples.
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the advantages
such
as building, infrastructure, media, Correct word choice
and transports
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. It can be clear Fix the agreement mistake
transport
than
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that
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people
capability
to construct new things. Correct article usage
the capability
For instance
, transports
without drivers. First of all, figure cars
accidents Change the noun form
car
in
the roads decrease and there will be no injuries at Change preposition
on
this
time
. Although
, all know that cars
accidents are a more Change the noun form
car
commen
happen in the mega police. Correct your spelling
common
Secondly
, robots can control all systems at the
same Correct article usage
apply
time
together like camera
, security, smart technologies, Fix the agreement mistake
cameras
sensors
.If Correct word choice
and sensors
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in one day it means Change the verb form
happens
than
development does not stand still and Correct your spelling
that
this
technology would be eco-friendly.
On the other hand
, humans require more time
to explore transfer without drivers since that is
a technology. Moreover
, scientists need a lot of time
to test and be safe for people
and consider all of
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apply
aspects
. Add an article
the aspects
In other words
, It will not be soon. Furthermore
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be
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apply
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the human
factor
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factors
For example
, happen
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what happen
in
the bus, Change preposition
on
whnen
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when
bus
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the bus
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crowded Add a missing verb
is so
however
many people
need to exit from bus
at the right stop and Add an article
the bus
a bus
robats
do not understand.
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robots
To conclude
, I strongly believe that in the future driverless cars
will get a lot of attention from people
in other countries and it would be more helpful for the city and tourism in the city. Therefore
, it appear
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