In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

#future #cars #buses #trucks #driverless #people #vehicles #passengers

Our world is developing day by day and in the

future

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all

transports

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such

cars

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trucks

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and trucks

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will be without drivers.

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transports

have a

passageres

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passages

passengers

only

people

who are

traveling

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inside. I personally believe that it would be more helpful for

people

and improve infrastructure in the city and world.

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essay will discuss

advantages

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and disadvantages of driverless driving with some examples. On the one hand, nowadays humanity is developing in many aspects

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transports

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. It can be clear

than

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people's

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have

capability

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to construct new things.

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transports

without drivers. First of all, figure

cars

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accidents

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the roads decrease and there will be no injuries at

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time

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, all know that

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accidents are a more

commen

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common

happen in the mega police.

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, robots can control all systems at

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same

time

together like

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, security, smart technologies,

sensors

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happen

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in one day it means

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development does not stand still and

this

technology would be eco-friendly.

On the other hand

, humans require more

time

to explore transfer without drivers since

that is

a technology.

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, scientists need a lot of

time

to test and be safe for

people

and consider all

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aspects

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, It will not be soon.

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human and

due to

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factor

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happen

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what happen

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the bus,

whnen

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bus

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the bus

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crowded

however

many

people

need to exit from

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at the right stop and

robats

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robots

do not understand.

To conclude

, I strongly believe that in the future driverless

cars

will get a lot of attention from

people

in other countries and it would be more helpful for the city and tourism in the city.

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, it

appear

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good feedback for

people

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life.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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