thr table and the charts below give information the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in a one area of britian. the table shows where the money vame from and the chart shows how it was distributed
The given table and pie charts show data about the police financial plan for 2017 and 2018 in one city in Britain. The table illustrates where the capital came from
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the chart indicates how it is distributed.
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, the fund came from three sectors namely : National Government, Local Taxes and other sources. In 2017, the highest income came from National Government is 175.5 Linking Words
Euro
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million
which Use synonyms
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the same with 2018 but slightly increased by 2.3 Correct subject-verb agreement
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Euro
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million
. The second place is Local Taxes with an income of 91.2 Use synonyms
Euro
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million
in 2017 and 102.3 Use synonyms
Euro
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million
in 2018. It is shown that Use synonyms
there
slight difference between both years is 11.8 M. The lower police budget came from other sources with the differences between 2017 and 2018 being only 0.5 M.
In accordance with the data from both years (2017 and 2018), the biggest place for spending the money is the salary for staff and officers. Replace the word
their
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, the following place is building and transport and the Linking Words
last
is for technology. In ,addition there is a slight decrease for spent money on salaries from 2017 to 2018 is 6 per cent Linking Words
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other fields showed different increases and steady are technology and building with percentages of 6 per cent and 0 per cent respectively.Linking Words
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