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The picture shows how to produce clothes from recycled plastic.

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The picture shows how to produce clothes from recycled
plastic
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It is clear that
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 there are a total of 13 stages in
this
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 linear
process
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, which can
further
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 be grouped into collection, preparation and
productions
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production
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 steps.
Additionally
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, a range of specialized pieces of equipment
are
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is
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 utilized in
this
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process
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,
although
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 the main raw material is
plastic
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.
At the first stage
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 in the
process
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,
plastic
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bottles
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 discarded in waste collection depots are taken out and loaded onto special trucks. These trucks
then
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 deliver the wasted
bottles
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 to factories for processing. Once the
bottles
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 are delivered to the factories, the second major phase of the
process
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 begins, which is preparing the raw material for clothes.
Initially
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, the wasted
bottles
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 are sorted by size, before being ground by a funnel-like machine. Having been ground, the substance is washed and exposed to sunlight for 10 hours to dry it. In the subsequent step, the dried
plastic
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 pieces are boiled,
thereafter
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 which the
process
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 called "straining" takes place. The piece of equipment utilized for straining produces yarns of various sizes, and these yarns,
following
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this
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, are placed into a weaving machine. The weaving machine
then
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 manufactures rolls of artificial (
plastic
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) fabric, which ultimately is used to make clothes,
such
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 as T-shirts.

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