Please explain the process of Pu-erh raw tea and ripe tea as shown in the diagram.

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the diagram illustrates the
process
of making pu-erh ripe
tea
and raw
tea
.
overall
, both
tea
-making processes have three same initial stages,pan frying , rolling and drying under the sun after
this
process
differs for ripe and raw teas. in the pan-frying
process
, the leaves of the tree are taken into a big pan and allowed to fry,which causes the inactivation of enzymes.
Then
the leaves are rolled and dried under the sunlight.after completion of 3 common steps ,making ripe
tea
include three 3 steps . after drying under the sun , loose raw
tea
fermentation by mould and
then
lose ripe
tea
,and become pu -erh ripe
tea
. for making raw
tea
,loose raw
tea
need to compress to become pu-erh raw
tea
,and
then
aged by storage ,and in the final step become vintage pu-erh raw
tea
.and compare with the
process
of making ripe
tea
,the
process
of making raw
tea
is simple than the
process
of ripe
tea
.
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