some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. others believe that children who are taught to co-perate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

When finding suitable methods to teach

children

, there are a variety of things that we have to consider.

While

some people believe that encouraging the feeling of competition is better, I would argue that collaboration should be preferred to let them become the useful version when they grow up. On the one hand, a sense of competition is beneficial for

children

in some ways. First of all, it creates motivation to try their best in any situation.

For example

,

children

can get great rewards every month if they get to the top of the class's ranking. In

this

way,

children

would be motivated to overcome their friends by trying to study hard.

Moreover

, pupils will understand the value of victory and appreciate what they go through. If they tried their best to get something, they would have to experience difficult things.

That is

when they know how hard to get the achievement and appreciate their efforts.

On the other hand

, I believe that teaching

children

to cooperate can let them become more useful when they grow up. It is clear to see that "teamwork makes the dream work."

While

working in a team effectively,

children

would know how to combine the strengths and drawbacks of the team members.

That is

the way to achieve great success and create opportunities for others to work better. On top of that, working with other people can help

children

form new and strengthen their relationships, which is beneficial for their daily life and work. Team members,

for instance

, can develop into best friends and

children

can learn from them to be more independent and get more experiences. In conclusion, I do agree with teaching

children

to cooperate with others than compete with them to grow up. Even though competition can motivate

children

, working with other people can make them more useful and develop completely.

Hence

, combining both methods when teaching them would be the best way to get the maximum effect on every child.