The graph shows the spending three kinds of spreads in us from 1981 and 2007.

The graph shows the spending three kinds of spreads in us from 1981 and 2007.
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The line chart illustrates the expenditure on spreads in the United States of America from the year 1981 to 2007.
Initially
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, we can observe that people prefer butter over
margarine
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and their demand increased by 20
grams
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over the next 5 years,
whereas
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, the same was reduced for
margarine
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.
However
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, during the following span of five years,
margarine
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's purchase rose by twenty
grams
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and remained the same for the consecutive span,
while
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for butter there was a steep decline that continued till 2007 and it failed to recover.
Similarly
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, a
a
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fall in
margarine
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consumption commenced in 1996 and prevailed till 2007. Another significant observation here is that consumption of low-fat and reduced spreads commenced in 1996 and steeply rose to 80
grams
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within half a decade and
then
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diminished only by 5
grams
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words margarine, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "steep" was used 2 times.
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