Some educationalists think that a programme of international exchange visits will offer various benefits for teenage school students. Do you think the advantages of it outweigh the disadvantages?

It is irrefutable fact that in

this

modern era, an increasing number of more and more humans believe that some educationalists think that a programme of international exchange visits will invent different benefits for

youngsters

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school

students

. Many individuals hold different beliefs about it. Personally l definitely with the above-expressed statement and there are many compelling reasons to support my view. In

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following essay, l intend two reasons for

this

. First and foremost, one of the main advantages is that most of the teachers suppose that some programmes of international exchange visits will offer various profits for teenage school

students

.

This

is the reason, they may learn international knowledge

by

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this

method . From my point of view,

this

is

very

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useful way for

students

, not only

students

but

also

countries . Because if teenagers know worldview knowledge , they can apply their knowledge

for

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the development of the country.

For example

, we can use the information we learn from another country to develop our technologies .

On the other

hand

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moving it should be noted that everything has its merits and demerits.

For

this

reason, it has some drawbacks. From my point of view,

this

way is a bit harmful to teenagers .

This

is the reason, if

this

method becomes widespread, individuals will lose their national

customes

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customers

customs

.

That is

to say, they may

also

learn unnecessary information .

For instance

, in American education , children do not have to respect their teachers. Yet, it can lead to very bad situations in our country. By way of my conclusion, l once again reaffirm my position that it has some drawbacks and advantages for

students

.