You recently started commuting to work by bicycle and discovered that there is a problem with bicycle parking near the building where you work. Write a letter to the building manager. 1) Explain the reason for using a bicycle to commute 2) what problems have you encountered with parking 3) what are your recommendations to solve the problem
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing
this
letter to you to relay some difficulties I have witnessed in the past couple of weeks with bicycle parking near the building where I work.
My name is Sadra Majidi and my office is in your building.Due to
the presence of several office buildings and banks in the vicinity of my office,there is always a
heavy traffic.Remove the article
apply
For
this
reason,I decided to purchase a bicycle and commute to work with it.
I have encountered some difficulty in parking ever since I have been coming here by bike.
Firstly
,The designated space for bicycle parking is located behind the building and is a long distance from the entrance.Please change this
site and move it to the front of the building if possible.
Secondly
,The capacity of this
place is very limited and most of the time there are no empty parking spaces,which is annoying.It is better to consider a bigger space for bike parking.
Please I honestly request you to investigate properly and take action as soon as possible.Your positive solution will be very favorable
for me.
Yours faithfullyChange the spelling
favourable
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coherence cohesion
Try to maintain consistent and proper spacing between sentences and punctuation marks for better readability.
task achievement
The letter clearly explains the reasons for using a bicycle, the problems encountered, and provides recommendations.
coherence cohesion
The letter is well-structured and generally maintains a logical flow from one point to the next.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and suitable for addressing a building manager.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.